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怎样让雅思写作的词“活”起来

中国雅思网 发表时间:2018年9月2日

自己的雅思作文没有什么可读性,行文枯燥,分数不高。那么,这种情况该如何解决呢?如何能够让雅思写作的词汇运用“活”起来呢?妙法之一就是在日常的训练中翻译汉语的美文。

这项工作是分2各阶段的:阶段1就是边自己翻译边参看范文,专门积累认识的但是想不到的单词,那些不认识的就放过去。阶段2就是尽量完全自己翻译,形成词汇反应。

下面提供一篇文章,按照老师说的步骤动起来吧!

原创范文:

13-05-18

Some people think all children learn history in school is important. Some others think learning subjects more relevant to life is important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

当今社会,教育对一个人来讲起着至关重要的作用,尤其是学生。而学生在课堂上学的课程则非常重要。有些人认为应该把历史课加入到学生每天的课程中,伴随着一些非议说学生应该学习那些和生活有关的更重要的课程。

In the modern society with strong competition, effect of education is significant for individuals, especially for students. Therefore, the course school arrange for students is the key to its best outcomes. It is commonly thought that history class should be added into daily curriculum timetable, with an arguable view that lessons related to practical life are more meaningful. (58 words)

历史课/贯穿了从古至今的发展,变化,及对未来的联系。

去让学生更加好的了解自己国家的进化过程乃至整个世界的发展,对于他们的前途是至关重要的。历史课包含了一个国家从几亿年前到现在的演变过程,包括原始人,殖民期间,各种战争,国家建立和统一及政府的统治等等,有助于树立正确的价值观,培养判断事物的能力以及批判性思考的能力。

History class goes through the great development from the past to the present situation of a country, even to the close connection with the future. It's critical for students’ prospect to understand the evolution and development of their country, even of the whole world. History contains the huge evolution of a country from millions of years ago, including the original people, colony period, various battles, the unification of a nation and the rule of a government, which facilitate them to build up correct value system, cultivate the ability of judging facts and enhance their critical-thinking capability. (96 words)

然而,历史不能在全方面帮助学生。现在的社会竞争很强,学生学习压力颇大,在课堂上宝贵的时间就留给了其他更重要的科目,比如科学,外语等等。这些科目直接联系到了学生以后的生活。这些重要的科目给予学生的知识可以直接影响学生以后的工作,比如学好外语可以出国留学,找到更好的工作过更好的生活。

However, history classes cannot educate all-round students. The great competition in modern community pushes great pressure on students, so some other important subjects should be given more valuable class time, such as science, and English, which is directly connected with the future life of students. The essential knowledge taught by these courses is able to affect the vocation of students, for instance, either to learn a foreign language to go aboard for further education or to find a better job with high salary to ensure a good life. (88 words)

总结下来,这两种说法都各有好处,也有各自的缺点,我们应该取长补短,适当的加入历史课,但也要顾全其他重要重要的课程。

In conclusion, both these two options have their advantages and disadvantages as well. We should maximize its benefits and minimize the drawbacks. It will benefit students a lot if adding history courses properly and consider about other important subjects. (39 words)

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