Part 2 话题精讲系列 2:
Describe a garden you visited you should say :
1. where it is
2. how it looks like
3. what people do there / what you did there
4. how you felt about it and why you like to visit it .
1.I ‘d like to talk about the city botanic garden, which is located in the beautiful suburb . It’s a stone’s throw from my work place . I like to go there from time to time . Today , it’s become a popular tourist attraction , seeing tens of millions of visitors from all over the worldevery year .
2.It’s a breathtaking, sensationally gorgeous garden. It has an amazing landscape . There are many kinds of flowers , for example : rose ,lily , jasmine , sunflowers. some flowers are very rare. I can’t even telltheir names . When they blossom , the air would be filled with sweetfragrance , which makes it a paradise for people who want to get away from the stressful urban life .
3.I usually go there with my parents at weekends . We’d have a picnic ,but most of time , just wonder around, check out those amazing plants . Once a year , it holds a grand flower exhibition .it usually lasts a few day .During that period of time , hundreds of kinds of flowers would be displayed to the visitors . for flower lovers , it’s a carnival .
4.Lastly , let me tell you why I like to visit it . it’s a cheerful place . the flower scent makes me forget all the stress I have in life . If there’s something on my mind , I’d go there,find a place to be alone for a moment . I feel like I can find the inner peace there .After all these years , it’s become a very special place for me .
That’s what I want to say for this topic .
Thank you for your time .
1. I ‘d like to talk about the city botanic garden, which is located in the beautiful suburb： 我想要来聊一下坐落于美丽市郊的城市植物园
2. it’s a stone’s throw from my work place: 离开我工作的地方只有一步之遥
3. from time to time: 时不时 (习语)
4. tourist attraction: 旅游景点
5.It’s a breathtaking, sensationally gorgeous garden：(这是一个很地道的表达方式， 比beautiful 要强太多了)没到让人叹为观止的花园
6:It has an amazing landscape：风景很美
7: When they blossom , the air would be filled with sweet fragrance , which makes it a paradise for people who want to get away from the stressful urban life ： (这是一定要背的得分很高的句子。首先他是复合句， 语法的分数自然会走高。而且用词和话题息息相关。格调也很高。)当鲜花盛开的时候，空气中会弥漫甜甜的花香， 那时候花园成为了一个人们躲避生活压力最好的地方。
8. wonder around, check out those amazing plants：散散步， 看看植物
9. grand flower exhibition：盛大的花展
10. Lastly , let me tell you why I like to visit it ：(这是连接句， 在考试中这会在连贯度上给你带来更高的分数， 而普遍来说考生们是不会的)
11.it’s a cheerful place . the flower scent makes me forget all the stress I have in life . (这个理由理所当然是说花园的第一理由，格调也会很高， 之前已经用过了fragrance , 这边我会选择换词， scent 会给我带来更高的词汇分， 还有注意细节，make sb do sth )
12. After all these years , it’s become a very special place for me: 多年后，这个花园对我来说已经成为了一个很特别的地方。(注意细节， after all these years , 这是个很好的口语说法， 很自然的转折)
13.That’s what I want to say for this topic .Thank you for your time :(这是礼貌的结尾， 你在考试中一定没有说过。良好的态度会给你带来更高的映像分。)