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雅思口语精讲系列part2-你去过的一个公园

中国雅思网 发表时间:2018年10月26日

Part 2 话题精讲系列 2:

Describe a garden you visited you should say :

1. where it is

2. how it looks like

3. what people do there / what you did there

4. how you felt about it and why you like to visit it .

 

高分参考:

  1.I ‘d like to talk about the city botanic garden, which is located in the beautiful suburb . It’s a stone’s throw from my work place . I like to go there from time to time . Today , it’s become a popular tourist attraction , seeing tens of millions of visitors from all over the worldevery year .

  2.It’s a breathtaking, sensationally gorgeous garden. It has an amazing landscape . There are many kinds of flowers , for example : rose ,lily , jasmine , sunflowers. some flowers are very rare. I can’t even telltheir names . When they blossom , the air would be filled with sweetfragrance , which makes it a paradise for people who want to get away from the stressful urban life .

  3.I usually go there with my parents at weekends . We’d have a picnic ,but most of time , just wonder around, check out those amazing plants . Once a year , it holds a grand flower exhibition .it usually lasts a few day .During that period of time , hundreds of kinds of flowers would be displayed to the visitors . for flower lovers , it’s a carnival .

  4.Lastly , let me tell you why I like to visit it . it’s a cheerful place . the flower scent makes me forget all the stress I have in life . If there’s something on my mind , I’d go there,find a place to be alone for a moment . I feel like I can find the inner peace there .After all these years , it’s become a very special place for me .

  That’s what I want to say for this topic .

  Thank you for your time .

 

得分必备语料:

  1. I ‘d like to talk about the city botanic garden, which is located in the beautiful suburb: 我想要来聊一下坐落于美丽市郊的城市植物园

  2. it’s a stone’s throw from my work place: 离开我工作的地方只有一步之遥

  3. from time to time: 时不时 (习语)

  4. tourist attraction: 旅游景点

  5.It’s a breathtaking, sensationally gorgeous garden:(这是一个很地道的表达方式, 比beautiful 要强太多了)没到让人叹为观止的花园

  6:It has an amazing landscape:风景很美

  7: When they blossom , the air would be filled with sweet fragrance , which makes it a paradise for people who want to get away from the stressful urban life : (这是一定要背的得分很高的句子。首先他是复合句, 语法的分数自然会走高。而且用词和话题息息相关。格调也很高。)当鲜花盛开的时候,空气中会弥漫甜甜的花香, 那时候花园成为了一个人们躲避生活压力最好的地方。

  8. wonder around, check out those amazing plants:散散步, 看看植物

  9. grand flower exhibition:盛大的花展

  10. Lastly , let me tell you why I like to visit it :(这是连接句, 在考试中这会在连贯度上给你带来更高的分数, 而普遍来说考生们是不会的)

  11.it’s a cheerful place . the flower scent makes me forget all the stress I have in life . (这个理由理所当然是说花园的第一理由,格调也会很高, 之前已经用过了fragrance , 这边我会选择换词, scent 会给我带来更高的词汇分, 还有注意细节,make sb do sth )

  12. After all these years , it’s become a very special place for me: 多年后,这个花园对我来说已经成为了一个很特别的地方。(注意细节, after all these years , 这是个很好的口语说法, 很自然的转折)

  13.That’s what I want to say for this topic .Thank you for your time :(这是礼貌的结尾, 你在考试中一定没有说过。良好的态度会给你带来更高的映像分。)